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Hello US,

I have a customer who needs a perfect translation for his small company website. He asked me for help. I am quite ok on english, but not perfect.

Can you help me on the following sales intro text? I know it needs some improvements, which only you guys know ... Thanks for Help on this! daytona

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We offer you quite interesting and rare products. Our team is to be found worldwide on the way the best quality and fair prices and to offer you to you here on xyz.com. Our product-portfolio is extended constantly, you simply visit us regularly or watch our newsletter. Also we have at regular intervals promotions and special limited offers. Let Us know your wishes! We want to build this WebShop to your best convinience. Easy and userfriendly as possible. Our products are of best choice, highest quality and fair priced.
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Wow!

So many responds? Well, not surprised.
It represents the current level of US-hospitality ...

Maybe I ask sunshine Obama ...

Our company is a world wide leader in offering a variety of interesting and unique products. You can view the quality and affordable pricing of our products at xyz.com. In addition, we are constantly looking to add new products that will benefit you, the consumer. Also, our online newsletter details these additions and will give you the opportunity to be the first to know of our valuable promotional offers throughout the year. Please visit our website and see the many products we offer and the ways it can make your life easier. We want to serve you and are eager to receive your feedback regarding our website, services and products.

Here is my offer of help ... let me know how this works for them, ok?

Thank you very much, ovcollege

It seems to work well.